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[QUOTE="01Asia, post: 5098530, member: 78686"] Je trouve qu'il n'y a pas beaucoup de fautes. Voilà comment j'aurai corrigé, mais n'hésite pas à demander à d'autres personnes pour vérifier au cas où: One day , when I was invited to my cousin's birthday , my cousin , my brother and myself left home to go out... A lot of children were playing with rock...It was a battle !!But at the moment the children annoyed my brother and he was running after one boy !!It was a very big race into the city !!After a few moment my brother was not income...A girl said to me that Florian, my brother was kidnapped by two men !! I looked for my brother during two hours but nothing...I started crying...I thought that it was my fault...The best brother of the world disappeared !!Suddenly, a car stopped in front of me and one man released..I was scared and I run as far as I could... Hidden in a tree I waited that the car disappears...I took the road back and I was thinking about what I will tell to my mother about my little brother...I was in tears.In the stairway I took my time because I was afraid to see the reaction of my mother.Opening the door, I saw my brother who was playing card quietly !!I was relieved !!!In reality nobody had kidnapped Florian...He was simply hungry and then he came back to home ..If he knew how I was afraid... [/QUOTE]
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