BONJOUR à tous et merci de prendre le temps de me répondre. Voila j'ai un que vous m'aidez à corriger mes fautes dans se texte:
One day , when I was invite to my cousin birthday , my cousin , my brother and me lefts home to go out...
A lot of children were playing with rock...It was a battle !!But at a moment the children annoyed my brother and he runs after one boy !!It was a very big race into the city !!After a fiew moment my brother was not income...A girl said to me that Florian, my brother was kidnap by two men !!
I looked for my brother during two hours but nothing...I started crying...I thouhgt that it was my fault...The best brother of the world disappeared !!Suddenly ; a car stopped in front of me and one man released..I was scared and I had run as far as I can...
Hidden in a tree I waited that the car disappears...I took the road back and tried what i will tell to my mother about my little brother...I was in tears.In the stairway I took my time because I was afraid to see the reaction of my mother.Opening the door and i saw my brother who playing card quietly !!I was relieved !!!In reality nobody had kidnapped Florian...He had simply hungry and he came back to home ..If he knew how I was afraid...
Merci encore!
One day , when I was invite to my cousin birthday , my cousin , my brother and me lefts home to go out...
A lot of children were playing with rock...It was a battle !!But at a moment the children annoyed my brother and he runs after one boy !!It was a very big race into the city !!After a fiew moment my brother was not income...A girl said to me that Florian, my brother was kidnap by two men !!
I looked for my brother during two hours but nothing...I started crying...I thouhgt that it was my fault...The best brother of the world disappeared !!Suddenly ; a car stopped in front of me and one man released..I was scared and I had run as far as I can...
Hidden in a tree I waited that the car disappears...I took the road back and tried what i will tell to my mother about my little brother...I was in tears.In the stairway I took my time because I was afraid to see the reaction of my mother.Opening the door and i saw my brother who playing card quietly !!I was relieved !!!In reality nobody had kidnapped Florian...He had simply hungry and he came back to home ..If he knew how I was afraid...
Merci encore!